Three Sheets to the Wind

No, this post is not about drinking. Not yet, anyway. I’ve been researching a new novel, MacMillan Judge, Privateer. Set in 1815, this is the story of a young American who gets involved in a ransom parlay with Barbary Pirates. Through a series of vicious events he’s left stuck in a sailing launch with nothing but a Pennsylvania Long Rifle, some rations, and $20,000 in gold. So what does he do? Well, he’s an American first and foremost, and he missed his chances at glory through the war of 1812. He’s not going to sail into the sunset. Instead, he’s going to get himself to Spain, find a ship, hire a crew, and go back and rescue the person who was to be rightly ransomed.

This is easier said than done, both for our man MacMillan Judge, and yours truly, the writer. In the first place, I’ve never sailed a boat in my life. I prefer horsepower (the diesel kind) to wind power. Nonetheless, sailing ships are fascinating creatures. Much like steam engines, they show you their guts on the outside. They’re unwieldy, complicated, and still handsome the way they carry themselves with dignity.

Here’s a page from Lever’s book:

So I visited all sorts of ship museums, spoke to the people there, practically earned a degree in this sort of stuff. Then I found a book called The Young Sea Officer’s Sheet Anchor by one Darcy Lever. Mr. Lever learned all his sailing skills the hard way, as in aboard a ship in the East India Company back in the day. We’re talking about the late 1700’s here when ships were wood and men had few teeth and sometimes less brains. But they knew how to get from one side of the world to the other with nothing but the wind and the strength of their muscles. Lever starts with rope and goes all the way to how to maneuver a fully rigged ship in all conditions. It can be dry but with the illustrations it is amazing to contemplate just what it took to sail a square rigger. Utterly amazing that it worked at all!

Luckily this book has survived and has been reprinted in an economical paperback edition. I’ll be sure to credit it in the acknowledgments of my novel. If you ever get pressed into service, be sure you have this book with you. You’ll be captain in no time!

To further my education in the sailing world I’ll be traveling to various places, including Baltimore, MD, USA where they have a replica of a topsail schooner named the Pride of Baltimore II. I’ll be spending time aboard this vessel as schedules permit. Similarly, I’ll be checking out sailing vessels in Philadelphia, Mystic Connecticut and the coast of Maine. This will be a completely new experience for me. As mentioned above, I like diesel power, having spent more than 15 years working around tugboats. Nonetheless, there’s always something to be learned and that’s the fun of being a writer. You come up with a story and teach yourself all about the subject. If you’re really lucky, you get paid to share that story with others.

Published in: on June 14, 2008 at 9:08 pm  Leave a Comment  
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The Alhambra

The Alhambra is one of those mythical sites that is a must-see. Here’s a photo of your author, taken from across the valley with the palace/fortress in the background.

Washington Irving is the American given credit for saving much of what we see today when visiting the Alhambra. Irving traveled to Seville by ship and then overland to Granada. He documented this trip and various other adventures in his Tales of the Alhambra. These stories are fantastic in the true sense of the word. More interesting is the vivid accounts of the Spanish character which I found very accurate during my visit. Some of the people I met might have stepped directly from Irving’s pages despite more than 170 years between the two encounters.

It should also be noted that when Irving visited the Alhambra it was a much abused site. French troops retreating from Spain nearly blew up large portions of it. Looters stole pieces from every possible place. Thanks to Irving, conservations efforts began and the site was ultimately preserved and refurbished for all of us to see.

When visiting the Alhambra it is best to have tickets in advance. The regular tours are not simple cattle calls. My group’s guide had grown up in Granada but spent his summers in Germany. He spoke Spanish, English, and German with brilliant fluency, switching between the three for different people in the group. He never missed a beat and his enthusiasm was irresistible. As he said, “I love my job. Everyday I come to work in a magnificent palace.” And magnificent the Alhambra is. I remember seeing glossy photos of it in my childhood but nothing could have prepared me for the atmosphere of the place. If you have the good fortune to go to Spain, don’t miss it.

While you’re in Granada, the tapas are worthy of their looming neighbor on the cliff. But we’ll get into that later. Buen provecho!

Published in: on June 14, 2008 at 12:01 pm  Comments (3)  
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A Story Begins

Story ideas come from all kinds of sources. I use a small Moleskine notebook to jot most of these down.

On another message board I read a great post that said keeping a notebook was good for creative people because you can only keep so many ideas in your head at one time. So, if you put them in a notebook, you free up space for more. I thought that was brilliant insight into the creative process.

But what’s to be done with these ideas? Well, once I settle in to write a book, I crack open a new, larger sized notebook like this one:

Inside, I write a rambling description of the story that is basically a collection of the embellished ideas from the small Moleskine. I cross reference this first description with the Moleskines so that if I ever want to go back to the original source, I can find it. This gets to be a difficult problem when the story ideas show up in several of the Moleskines. When the general description is finished, I’ll start sketching major scenes, characters, and locations. From these blocks I start building up the story with outlines. Sometimes an outline is unnecessary, especially when the characters are at critical moments. Still, an outline keeps the writing on track and the writer out of trouble. If you don’t know where you’re going in the story, you’re stuck. Some people call this writer’s block and perhaps they’re right. However, with a decent outline, there’s always work to be done.

And that’s how I start a story. Finishing it is another matter. People often ask me if it’s difficult to write a book. My answer is this: It’s easy to start a book. It’s tremendously difficult to finish one. But we’ll talk about that later.

Published in: on June 13, 2008 at 4:49 pm  Comments (1)  
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One Tough School Teacher

I just finished reading The Collaborator of Bethlehem by Matt Beynon Rees. I don’t read much detective or mystery fiction these days but this one caught my eye. It’s set in present day Palestine and the protagonist is a hard-luck school teacher named Omar Yussef. One of his former students from years ago is accused of collaboration and Yussef sets off to clear his name. There are very few good guys in this book, only people with more or less evil in their hearts. Yussef is much better drawn than any of the Marlowe-type characters I’ve read. The bad guys don’t have much good in them but they have complicated motives that keeps them interesting and multi-dimensional.

The best part about this book is the way Rees weaves the plot through the looming presence of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict. His character Yussef is not so much stuck on one side or the other as he is caught in the middle. The book never preaches, nor does it come down against anything but the debilitating violence that never lets up.

The book also peers into the darker side of the various factions, how they operate businesses Mafia-style, how they intimidate everyone. Yussef sticks up for himself and others when he can. Sometimes he succeeds, most times he does not. And that brings me to the toughest part, there is no happy ending as much as there is a bit of justice.

Rees deserves all the accolades he received for this book. He writes better than the top-sellers in the genre. I only wish the book was a little longer with a bit more detail.

Published in: on June 9, 2008 at 10:39 pm  Leave a Comment  
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